Address Oct. 14 MR comments by Ribbon

recipes/core/netdb/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Default etc files required for networking"
+description = "Default data files required for networking"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/netdb.git"

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-edit/recipe.toml

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/res/icons/hicolor/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icon
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI text editor from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical text editor from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-files/recipe.toml

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/res/icons/hicolor/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icon
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI file manager from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical file manager from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-monitor/recipe.toml

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/res/icons/hicolor/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icon
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI system monitor from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical system monitor from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-reader/recipe.toml

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/res/icons/hicolor/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icon
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI PDF reader from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical PDF reader from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-settings/recipe.toml

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/resources/icons/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icons/
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI system settings from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical system settings from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-store/recipe.toml

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/res/icons/hicolor/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icon
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI app store from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical app store from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/cosmic/cosmic-term/recipe.toml

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ cp -rv "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/res/icons/hicolor/" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/icon
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GUI terminal emulator from COSMIC desktop"
+description = "Graphical terminal emulator from COSMIC desktop"
 dependencies = [
     "libxkbcommon",
 ]

recipes/data/shared-mime-info/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Freedesktop common MIME database"
+description = "FreeDesktop common MIME database"
 
 # This does not build update-mime-database to avoid bringing in C code to Redox
 [source]

recipes/demos/cmatrix/recipe.toml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ sed -i -e 's|#define USE_TIOCSTI 1|/* #undef USE_TIOCSTI */|g' config.h
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "Terminal based \"The Matrix\" like implementation"
+description = "Terminal based character raining effect from the Matrix movies"
 dependencies = [
     "terminfo"
 ]

recipes/demos/exampled/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Example of a daemon for Redox"
+description = "Redox device driver daemon example"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/exampled.git"

recipes/demos/gears/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Standard \"gears\" OpenGL demo"
+description = "Mesa3D \"gears\" OpenGL demo ported to Orbital windowing"
 
 [build]
 dependencies=[

recipes/demos/orbclient/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Example of a GUI app that creates a window by talking to the Orbital client library directly"
+description = "Orbital client library example"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/orbclient.git"

recipes/demos/osdemo/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Mesa offscreen rendering demo"
+description = "Mesa3D offscreen rendering (OSMesa) demo using Orbital windowing"
 
 [build]
 template = "custom"

recipes/demos/pixelcannon/recipe.toml

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ cp -v "${COOKBOOK_SOURCE}/manifest" "${COOKBOOK_STAGE}/usr/share/ui/apps/pixelca
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "3D laughing face GUI demo"
+description = "3D laughing face meme navigation demo"
 dependencies = [
     "orbital",
 ]

recipes/demos/sdl2-gears/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Standard \"gears\" OpenGL demo, running inside SDL2"
+description = "Mesa3D \"gears\" OpenGL demo ported to SDL2 windowing"
 
 [build]
 template = "custom"

recipes/dev/autoconf/recipe.toml

@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@ blake3 = "da1cc8af8551c343de9f42af0ae53fd7dff3623487157623892b6cd7e3bb5692"
 template = "configure"
 
 [package]
-description = "Tools for self-configuring software source code packages (creates \"configure\")"
+description = "Tools for self-configuring software source code (creates \"configure\" script)"
 dependencies = ["perl5"]

recipes/dev/automake/recipe.toml

@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@ blake3 = "f42cfc333aaaa11f2bcb05b5b0273b8706c820c22f9ba4367f7eb920551695cd"
 template = "configure"
 
 [package]
-description = "Tools for high-level build scripting atop Make (creates \"Makefile.in\")"
+description = "Tools for high-level build scripting atop GNU Make (creates \"Makefile.in\")"
 dependencies = ["perl5"]

recipes/dev/binutils-gdb/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Step debuggger, based on GNU binutils version"
+description = "GNU Binutils version of GDB debugger"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/binutils-gdb"

recipes/dev/clang21/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "LLVM-based C/C++ compiler"
+description = "LLVM C/C++ frontend/compiler"
 
 [source]
 same_as = "../llvm21"

recipes/dev/cmake/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Cross-platform C/C++ build tooling"
+description = "Widely-used cross-platform build system"
 
 [source]
 tar = "https://github.com/Kitware/CMake/releases/download/v4.3.2/cmake-4.3.2.tar.gz"

recipes/dev/gcc13/recipe.toml

@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ fi
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "GNU Compiler Collection for C/C++"
+description = "GNU Compiler Collection"
 dependencies = [
     "gnu-binutils"
 ]

recipes/dev/gdbserver/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Attaches to a local process to run gdb on a different machine"
+description = "GDB server for remote debugging"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/gdbserver.git"

recipes/dev/gdk-pixbuf/recipe.toml

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ mesonflags = [
 ]
 
 [package]
-description = "Image loading library (PNG, JPEG, TIFF, TGA, GIF) from GNOME project"
+description = "Image loading library from GNOME project"
 dependencies = [
     "shared-mime-info",
 ]

recipes/dev/gitoxide/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Rust reimplementation of git"
+description = "Rust reimplementation of Git"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://github.com/Byron/gitoxide.git"

recipes/dev/gnu-make/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Build Makefile-based projects"
+description = "GNU version of Make tool"
 
 #TODO slower jobserver due to lack of named pipes
 [source]

recipes/dev/hello-world-examples/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "\"Hello world\" example code for over 1000 languages"
+description = "\"Hello world\" examples in over 1000 languages"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://github.com/leachim6/hello-world"

recipes/dev/llvm-rt21/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "LLVM additional support libraries used by clang"
+description = "LLVM 21.x libraries and tools additional support libraries used by Clang"
 
 [source]
 same_as = "../llvm21"

recipes/dev/llvm18/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Libraries and tools for LLVM generic compiler backend, version 18"
+description = "LLVM 18.x libraries and tools"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/llvm-project.git"

recipes/dev/lua54/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Lua programming language, PUC-Rio distribution, language version 5.4"
+description = "Lua programming language, PUC-Rio distribution, version 5.4"
 
 [source]
 tar = "https://lua.org/ftp/lua-5.4.7.tar.gz"

recipes/dev/luajit/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Lua programming language, LuaJIT distribution, language version 5.1 plus extensions"
+description = "JIT version of Lua programming language, version 5.1 plus extensions"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://luajit.org/git/luajit.git"

recipes/dev/nasm/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Netwide assembler for x86 and x86_64"
+description = "x86 assembler"
 
 [source]
 #TODO: nasm.us is down: tar = "https://www.nasm.us/pub/nasm/releasebuilds/2.14.02/nasm-2.14.02.tar.gz"

recipes/dev/patch/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Apply a diff file to an original"
+description = "Tool to apply a diff file to an original"
 
 [source]
 tar = "https://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/patch/patch-2.7.6.tar.xz"

recipes/dev/pciids/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Data file mapping mapping PCI IDs to human-readable names"
+description = "Data file mapping that maps PCI IDs to human-readable names"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://github.com/pciutils/pciids.git"

recipes/dev/python312/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Interactive, object-oriented programming language, 3.12 series"
+description = "Object-oriented interpreted programming language, version 3.12.x"
 
 [source]
 tar = "https://www.python.org/ftp/python/3.12.12/Python-3.12.12.tar.xz"

recipes/dev/redoxer/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Wrapper tool to configure Rust, C, and other compilers to build for Redox"
+description = "Wrapper and command-line tool to quickly test and run Rust, C, and C++ applications and libraries in a minimal Redox virtual machine"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/redoxer"

recipes/dev/rust/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Safe, performant programming language"
+description = "Rust compiler and tooling"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/rust.git"

recipes/dev/wasi-libc/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Libc implementation for WebAssembly/WASI"
+description = "C Standard Library implementation for WebAssembly/WASI"
 
 # NOTE: This is only used to compile into wasi
 [source]

recipes/dri/drm-info/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Tool to dump info about Direct Rendering Manager devices"
+description = "Tool to dump information about Linux Direct Rendering Manager drivers"
 
 [source]
 tar = "https://gitlab.freedesktop.org/emersion/drm_info/-/archive/v2.9.0/drm_info-v2.9.0.tar.gz"

recipes/emulators/dosbox/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Emulation environment for MS-DOS"
+description = "MS-DOS emulator"
 
 [source]
 tar = "https://sourceforge.net/projects/dosbox/files/dosbox/0.74-3/dosbox-0.74-3.tar.gz/download"

recipes/emulators/flycast/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Sega Dreamcast, Naomi, Naomi 2 and Atomiswave emulator"
+description = "Sega Dreamcast, Naomi, Naomi 2, and Atomiswave emulator"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://github.com/flyinghead/flycast.git"

recipes/emulators/libretro-super/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Super Nintendo core for Retroarch"
+description = "libretro library and cores"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://github.com/jackpot51/libretro-super.git"

recipes/emulators/retroarch/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Frontend for cores by various developers emulating vintage systems"
+description = "Official libretro frontend"
 
 #TODO: fix linking error
 [source]

recipes/emulators/rs-nes/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "NES and Famicom emulator"
+description = "NES and Famicom emulator written in Rust"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/rs-nes.git"

recipes/emulators/rust64/recipe.toml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 [package]
-description = "Commodore 64 emulator"
+description = "Commodore 64 emulator written in Rust"
 
 [source]
 git = "https://gitlab.redox-os.org/redox-os/rust64.git"

recipes/emulators/rustual-boy/recipe.toml

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ cookbook_cargo
 """
 
 [package]
-description = "Virtual Boy emulator"
+description = "Virtual Boy emulator written in Rust"
 dependencies = [
     "orbital",
 ]